Brave Bird English · Class 10

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5 th Unit: A-Reading: storeyed House-I - Para No: 26 from the List

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There was something really wrong with the State Transport bus. (22) It had came up the winding road in the mountain as if with a life-time effort. (23) The road was now up-hill and yet the bus moved as slowly as a sick man walking with the help of another. (24) It reached the plain where the dispensary building was situated, and stood still, with an obstinate bull. (25) Now, the destination was hardly a mile or away. (26) But the driver was sore and the conductor has no option but to be silent When they realized that the bus wouldn't move any faster, a couple of passengers. exclaimed: "Goddammit for a bloody nuisance!"

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Write the corrected word or phrase for each numbered error (22–26). Submit your answers to receive marks, then review the explanations.

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Correct (22): It had come …………………………………….. a life-time effort.
Explanation: After the word “had,” the verb must be in past participle form. “Came” is simple past; the correct past participle is “come.”

Correct (23): The road was now down-hill and yet the bus moved as slowly as a sick man walking with the help of another.
Explanation: The earlier lines show the bus already came up the mountain. So the road at this point goes downward, not upward. Therefore, “down-hill” is correct.

Correct (24): … and stood still, like an obstinate bull.
Explanation: “With an obstinate bull” is incorrect because it sounds like the bus is standing together with a bull. We need “like” to make a comparison.

Correct (25): Now, the destination was hardly a mile or two away.
Explanation: The phrase “a mile or away” is incomplete. The correct expression is “a mile or two” to show an approximate short distance.

Correct (26): But the driver was sore and the conductor had no option but to be silent.
Explanation: The whole paragraph is in past tense, so the verb must also be in past tense. “Has” is present tense; the correct past form is “had.”